Anyone fancy telling me what they think of my song

[gullick]

Hi, could I have some feedback on my song. I did the music and lyrics my mate Dale sang it.

http://www.myspace.com/regul

Its the top one, scenic route.

Thanks :)

Edit: Its a draft btw, the quality of the recording ain't too good but we're going to re-record it sooner or later.

[dondaz]

Good music, ok lyrics. But I think you need someone with a different voice to sing this one mate.

Sorry to sound like Simon Callum, but you did ask:D

[chris]

It's a very good song but like Dondaz said, the vocals aren't nearly as good as they need to be. Much potential.

[xdnax]

if music would play on my pc on myspace, i'd let ya know mate....but i added ya all the same lol.

i'd figure it out but i just got my mic working spot on and i aint touching my sound card EVER AGAIN! lmao

[limelady]

Hi, could I have some feedback on my song. I did the music and lyrics my mate Dale sang it.

http://www.myspace.com/regul

Its the top one, scenic route.

Thanks :)

Edit: Its a draft btw, the quality of the recording ain't too good but we're going to re-record it sooner or later.


Hi gullick, I agree with dondaz and chris. I liked the song and there is
potential for it to be 'worked up', but I too feel a different vocalist is
needed to do the song justice. :)

[gullick]

Thanks for your feedback friends :)

[adimon]

Thanks for your feedback friends :)

What software did you use to record this?

I share the others' sentiments - a great song, nice melody & words.

Your mate's voice isn't that awful. A bit of compression on the mic, and some reverb, and it would sound ok I think.

Great effort though! Well done :cool: