Burden of the Holy - my song :)

[vril]

Please give this a listen and let me know what you think :D

If you go to this link, you can either hear it directly from the player, or download it... (I hope --- if this doesn't work for any reason, let me know ASAP, thanks)

http://www.4shared.com/file/154359748/23b577c3/Burden_of_the_Holy.html

Enjoy :)

[simplify]

Please give this a listen and let me know what you think :D

If you go to this link, you can either hear it directly from the player, or download it... (I hope --- if this doesn't work for any reason, let me know ASAP, thanks)

http://www.4shared.com/file/154359748/23b577c3/Burden_of_the_Holy.html

Enjoy :)

Thank you....I did enjoy it.:)

[vril]

thanks simplify :D

ps. I like your username... it's good advice in today's crazy world! :p

[particlepopup]

Superdooper, do you like mike oldfield i can hear undertones( defo not a bad thing ) only my humble opinion, a bit of contructive critiscm, id ditch the synth parts at 1.25 and 2.08 (hope you dont mind, i know us artistes can get a bit defensive) they make it a bit cheesy, but the rest is really really good, nice touch with the european metal strings and hammer thingy (no idea wot its called) :)

[polveirbecker]

About as nice and relaxing that I’ve found.

Might download it tomorrow. :)

Its such a wonderful treat to go from what I do in my music to listen to this. Ever heard of a band called Galt Aureus?

Reminds me of them to an extent. :D

[vril]

Superdooper, do you like mike oldfield i can hear undertones( defo not a bad thing ) only my humble opinion, a bit of contructive critiscm, id ditch the synth parts at 1.25 and 2.08 (hope you dont mind, i know us artistes can get a bit defensive) they make it a bit cheesy, but the rest is really really good, nice touch with the european metal strings and hammer thingy (no idea wot its called) :)

Oh I don't mind at atll! Truthfully I didn't spend much time picking out which sound to use for that part.. it's playing the same melody as the bass, since the bass is hard to pick out I wanted to double it up with another instrument.. maybe something more "organic" would fit better :)

I'm not familiar with Mike Oldfield but will check him out!

Oh and by the way apparently it's called a bazouki :D

Thanks for your comments polveirbecker. I have not heard of Galt Aureus but will give a listen!

[particlepopup]

Organic sounds good to me, mike oldfield is awesome, a few to go at are :
voyager, sounds of distant earth, and cant miss out tubular bells 1,2 and 3, good luck with your future creations look forward to hearing them.