A poem I wrote - today.

[miracles]

You can be.

I love you and I think you love me
We all just want to be free

You can be an atheist
Or a Christian like me
You can be a Buddhist and say "namaste"
You can be a Muslim and say "Inshallah"
We all just want to go far

I love my sons
And I know you love yours
We don’t want them to die in no wars

The leaders we have no longer lead
Where pawns in a game on their battle field

The leaders we had they never led
Millions have bled and even more are dead

Enough is enough, yes enough of this
We can have a life, a life of bliss
Do you believe it? I know it’s the truth
Its time to build it for the sake of our youth

I love you and I think you love me
We all just want to be free

You can be an atheist
Or a Christian like me
You can be a Buddhist and say "namaste"
You can be a Muslim and say "Inshallah"
We all just want to go far

[major seven]

You can be.

I love you and I think you love me
We all want to be free

You can be an atheist
Or a Christian like me
You can be a Buddhist and say "namaste"
You can be a Muslim and say "Inshallah"
We all want to go far

I love my sons
And I know you love yours
We don’t want them to die in no wars

The leaders we have no longer lead
Where pawns in a game on their battle field

The leaders we had they never led
Millions have bled and even more are dead

Enough is enough, yes enough of this
We can have a life, a life of bliss
Do you believe it? I know it’s the truth
Its time to build it for the sake of our youth

I love you and I think you love me
We all want to be free

You can be an atheist
Or a Christian like me
You can be a Buddhist and say "namaste"
You can be a Muslim and say "Inshallah"
We all want to go far


Hey M
Nice Job
Very True too.

:D

[fallensoul]

Well this is refreshing considering who is the author :)

Not bad.

[deadskinball]

I might print this out on some nice textured paper.

mahahahah

[miracles]

I might print this out on some nice textured paper.

mahahahah
:D your such a kidder.

[reality man]

Oh, a "christian" poet ... you should get that published.:confused:
I like to observe things myself and print my observations onto t-shirts ... ...here's one of my observations!


Has anyone noticed the similarities between God and Santa Claus?

God has a white beard - Santa has a white beard.

God lives in a white place - Santa lives in a white place.

God has angels to do his bidding - Santa has elves to do his bidding.

You have to pray to God if you want something - You have to write to Santa if you want something.

God gives you presents if you are a good boy/girl - Santa gives you presents of you are a good boy/girl.

God knows if you are good or bad and writes it all in the book of life - Santa knows if you are good or bad and writes it all on the naughty/nice list.

Both are thought of as being good guys ... BUT...

.....God burns you amongst hot coals if you are bad - Santa gives you coal if you are bad.


.......it's strange aint it? Maybe God hangs out in the north pole, because we haven't found him up in the sky yet, thats for sure!

[miracles]

Oh, a "christian" poet ... you should get that published.:confused:
I like to observe things myself and print my observations onto t-shirts ... ...here's one of my observations!


Has anyone noticed the similarities between God and Santa Claus?

God has a white beard - Santa has a white beard.

God lives in a white place - Santa lives in a white place.

God has angels to do his bidding - Santa has elves to do his bidding.

You have to pray to God if you want something - You have to write to Santa if you want something.

God gives you presents if you are a good boy/girl - Santa gives you presents of you are a good boy/girl.

God knows if you are good or bad and writes it all in the book of life - Santa knows if you are good or bad and writes it all on the naughty/nice list.

Both are thought of as being good guys ... BUT...

.....God burns you amongst hot coals if you are bad - Santa gives you coal if you are bad.


.......it's strange aint it? Maybe God hangs out in the north pole, because we haven't found him up in the sky yet, thats for sure!

I love you reality man, can I have a T-Shirt please? Lets be friends from now on eh? What do you say? Forgive me for being a grumpy old Christian.

[deadskinball]

:D your such a kidder.

Whew. I'm glad there is a smile in that post.

[reality man]

I love you reality man, can I have a T-Shirt please? Lets be friends from now on eh? What do you say? Forgive me for being a grumpy old Christian.


You wouldn't like my t-shirts miracles - but i'll be your friend if you be mine, although I have to let you know that I don't smoke the weed myself :eek: and we don't really have similar ideas about God either - but maybe we'll find something in common, who knows. ;)

[miracles]

You wouldn't like my t-shirts miracles - but i'll be your friend if you be mine, although I have to let you know that I don't smoke the weed myself :eek: and we don't really have similar ideas about God either - but maybe we'll find something in common, who knows. ;)

I dont smoke weed either. We are allowed to believe what we like friend. All the best.

[miracles]

Whew. I'm glad there is a smile in that post.

Im taking chill pills from now on. :D

[reality man]

I dont smoke weed either. We are allowed to believe what we like friend. All the best.


Sorry, it's just someone else posted that you did smoke the weed, I thought it would explain some things - nevertheless, my mistake - and you are right, we are allowed to believe what we like, but try to keep an open mind and remember that we are allowed to question and debate beliefs also - maybe then we can have some interesting discussions!

[bealert]

good effort but lines must mean something and not there just to rhyme..not bad though

[bealert]

You can be.

I love you and I think you love me
We all just want to be free

You can be an atheist
Or a Christian like me
You can be a Buddhist and say "namaste"
You can be a Muslim and say "Inshallah"
We all just want to go far

I love my sons
And I know you love yours
We don’t want them to die in no wars

The leaders we have no longer lead
Where pawns in a game on their battle field

The leaders we had they never led
Millions have bled and even more are dead

Enough is enough, yes enough of this
We can have a life, a life of bliss
Do you believe it? I know it’s the truth
Its time to build it for the sake of our youth

I love you and I think you love me
We all just want to be free

You can be an atheist
Or a Christian like me
You can be a Buddhist and say "namaste"
You can be a Muslim and say "Inshallah"
We all just want to go far
ill wait for you at the gates of hell
my disloyal and disgusting friend
ill wait for you with bated breath
for this is truly the end
you shout and scream for all you worth
you'll promise to be good
but let me tell you my soul's on fire..
is that much understood.
Im waiting for you as we speak
and rub my hands together
for the fire that burns in my heart
will last and burn forever.
ill rip the flesh from your bones
ill bite in to your soul
you will wish you never meet me
that short time ago.
you had your chance to leave me alone
you had your chance to run
but now you have come to my home
its my turn for some fun.
so think of this as you lay in your bed
and look forward to all to come
enjoy this life but remember this
my revenge is still to come.
but not while you live upon this earth
not while you live to tell
im waiting Where the fire burns
right here in the gates of HELL.

I wrote this about a year ago

[bealert]

ill wait for you at the gates of hell
my disloyal and disgusting friend
ill wait for you with bated breath
for this is truly the end
you shout and scream for all you worth
you'll promise to be good
but let me tell you my soul's on fire..
is that much understood.
Im waiting for you as we speak
and rub my hands together
for the fire that burns in my heart
will last and burn forever.
ill rip the flesh from your bones
ill bite in to your soul
you will wish you never meet me
that short time ago.
you had your chance to leave me alone
you had your chance to run
but now you have come to my home
its my turn for some fun.
so think of this as you lay in your bed
and look forward to all to come
enjoy this life but remember this
my revenge is still to come.
but not while you live upon this earth
not while you live to tell
im waiting Where the fire burns
right here in the gates of HELL.



Poetry comes from the heart and soul not the mind

[miracles]

ill wait for you at the gates of hell
my disloyal and disgusting friend
ill wait for you with bated breath
for this is truly the end
you shout and scream for all you worth
you'll promise to be good
but let me tell you my soul's on fire..
is that much understood.
Im waiting for you as we speak
and rub my hands together
for the fire that burns in my heart
will last and burn forever.
ill rip the flesh from your bones
ill bite in to your soul
you will wish you never meet me
that short time ago.
you had your chance to leave me alone
you had your chance to run
but now you have come to my home
its my turn for some fun.
so think of this as you lay in your bed
and look forward to all to come
enjoy this life but remember this
my revenge is still to come.
but not while you live upon this earth
not while you live to tell
im waiting Where the fire burns
right here in the gates of HELL.

I wrote this about a year ago
good poem. Hopefully you take your chance to run my friend.

[bealert]

good poem. Hopefully you take your chance to run my friend.
The devil never runs... but finds new paths in which to express hes feelings

[bealert]

good poem. Hopefully you take your chance to run my friend.
I have nothing against you Miracles you stick by what you believe and i can only have respect for that but don't be fooled in to beliving everything you read ..scriptures can be written to mislead and fool a victim. Hopefully faith will guide you and any thoughts you have from god are truly from the god you worship and not from another source that may not have your best interests at heart. Insanity is your friend it enables you to explore and see things from every angle without prejudice

[merlincove]

The devil never runs... but finds new paths in which to express hes feelings

...wears prada alot, by all accounts, hard to run in Prada, so i hear :rolleyes:

[fallensoul]

I like poems, I will write one for you miracles


You don't see what I see
You do not really know what I feel
I do not understand your conviction
In my eyes it is self assisted crucifixion

What I want is to burn the cross
Take the ashes and away them toss
So I can be free without limits
Not finding proof of my faith in digits

For my proof is the fact that I am here
For I am everywhere, yet nowhere
I exist in myself and outside myself
I been to heaven, I been to hell
I didn't like either, so I hear my heart
What does it have to tell?

When you have chosen your destination
I am still hang up with the preparations
To realize my perfect place
In some far away space
Where I can be with those I love
And fly free like the white dove

I do not agree with your belief
But everyone needs their relief

:)

[bealert]

First you must get the trust of your victim.
then you must cloud and obscure there vision.
only then can you corrupt.

The bible does all of these.

[reality man]

WOW - everyone is writing poems now - well miracles I guess you have inspired us to express ourselves in a better way ... here's something I penned a while ago ... It express's where I am coming from...


BACK AGAIN
By Reality Man

I turned the clock off, in my head.
Erased the faces, of my past days.
Now I smile, because I am blessed.
Present sunshine, is now all I see.

...and I won't go back again!

Because i've spent a million years going nowhere.
I've travelled through everybody's somewhere.
I've spent a lot of money doing nothing.
Now i'm free, from all I thought was something.
But it was nothing ... and I won't go back again.

Now i've entered the final dream.
I smell life's roses, they're bitter sweet.
So i'll bow, at the closing scene.
On a high, by use of freedom's key.

... and I won't go back again! ;)

[miracles]

I like poems, I will write one for you miracles


You don't see what I see
You do not really know what I feel
I do not understand your conviction
In my eyes it is self assisted crucifixion

What I want is to burn the cross
Take the ashes and away them toss
So I can be free without limits
Not finding proof of my faith in digits

For my proof is the fact that I am here
For I am everywhere, yet nowhere
I exist in myself and outside myself
I been to heaven, I been to hell
I didn't like either, so I hear my heart
What does it have to tell?

When you have chosen your destination
I am still hang up with the preparations
To realize my perfect place
In some far away space
Where I can be with those I love
And fly free like the white dove

I do not agree with your belief
But everyone needs their relief

:)

Very clever, cool poem:)

[miracles]

WOW - everyone is writing poems now - well miracles I guess you have inspired us to express ourselves in a better way ... here's something I penned a while ago ... It express's where I am coming from...


BACK AGAIN
By Reality Man

I turned the clock off, in my head.
Erased the faces, of my past days.
Now I smile, because I am blessed.
Present sunshine, is now all I see.

...and I won't go back again!

Because i've spent a million years going nowhere.
I've travelled through everybody's somewhere.
I've spent a lot of money doing nothing.
Now i'm free, from all I thought was something.
But it was nothing ... and I won't go back again.

Now i've entered the final dream.
I smell life's roses, they're bitter sweet.
So i'll bow, at the closing scene.
On a high, by use of freedom's key.


... and I won't go back again! ;)


Wow thats real good too.

[reality man]

Wow thats real good too.


Thanks miracles - see, now we've found something in common - I think we should get our poems published.

[miracles]

Thanks miracles - see, now we've found something in common - I think we should get our poems published.

If we publish them they will be misinterpreted bythe masses and blasphemed for all eternity. :D

[reality man]

If we publish them they will be misinterpreted bythe masses and blasphemed for all eternity. :D

I think you are right - although I tried to make mine coded and hid its true meaning with metaphors. :D

[miracles]

I think you are right - although I tried to make mine coded and hid its true meaning with metaphors. :D
Wow now that I look closely there are 50 features of 7 in the fisrt 7 words of your poem. :D,

[reality man]

Wow now that I look closely there are 50 features of 7 in the fisrt 7 words of your poem. :D,

It's not that coded - there's only a few metaphors really

[rhydra]

You can be.

I love you and I think you love me
We all just want to be free

You can be an atheist
Or a Christian like me
You can be a Buddhist and say "namaste"
You can be a Muslim and say "Inshallah"
We all just want to go far

I love my sons
And I know you love yours
We don’t want them to die in no wars

The leaders we have no longer lead
Where pawns in a game on their battle field

The leaders we had they never led
Millions have bled and even more are dead

Enough is enough, yes enough of this
We can have a life, a life of bliss
Do you believe it? I know it’s the truth
Its time to build it for the sake of our youth

I love you and I think you love me
We all just want to be free

You can be an atheist
Or a Christian like me
You can be a Buddhist and say "namaste"
You can be a Muslim and say "Inshallah"
We all just want to go far

I'm not a Christian but I love the poem, nice one! :)

[miracles]

I'm not a Christian but I love the poem, nice one! :)

Thanks for that. I appreciate the feedback.:)

[flereous]

You can be.

I love you and I think you love me
We all just want to be free

You can be an atheist
Or a Christian like me
You can be a Buddhist and say "namaste"
You can be a Muslim and say "Inshallah"
We all just want to go far

I love my sons
And I know you love yours
We don’t want them to die in no wars

The leaders we have no longer lead
Where pawns in a game on their battle field

The leaders we had they never led
Millions have bled and even more are dead

Enough is enough, yes enough of this
We can have a life, a life of bliss
Do you believe it? I know it’s the truth
Its time to build it for the sake of our youth

I love you and I think you love me
We all just want to be free

You can be an atheist
Or a Christian like me
You can be a Buddhist and say "namaste"
You can be a Muslim and say "Inshallah"
We all just want to go far

What about Pagans?

[miracles]

What about Pagans?
Nothing ryhmes with that, but them too. :)

Oh accept Ronald Reagans

[merlincove]

http://i667.photobucket.com/albums/vv35/merlincove/buddy.jpg

[miracles]

Thanks buddy

[merlincove]

;)

loving this thread :D

[miracles]

;)

loving this thread :D
Write a poem and post it :)

[bealert]

Insanity.
I walked upon southampton dock
seagulls scream within the flock
they look at me
they wink there eyes
they tell me truths
they tell me lies
they know my name yet ive never said
they talk to me within my head
they tell me who i cannot trust
they tell me not to hate or lust
they tell me to bring them bread
and in return i can talk with the dead
they tell me it's my darkest hour
but one like me will soon have power
they tell me not to have negative thoughts
and not to eat those chips i bought
they tell me not to drink water to
im not sure if that bits true
maybe i cant trust.. this flock of gulls
maybe they all have evil souls
ill walk some more and find another
who knows then what i might discover.

[let it shine]

miracles, the essential message of your poem is something that i find very refreshing. we need more stuff like this in the world today. it was genuine and heartfelt. may God bless you and guide you always.

[let it shine]

to most of the other posters in this thread...why do you give yourselves away like that? you aren't making it any fun for me anymore.

[bealert]

to most of the other posters in this thread...why do you give yourselves away like that? you aren't making it any fun for me anymore.
what exactly do you mean by giving yourselves away..poetry is a personnel thing ..if you write from your heart the poetry will flow if you write from your mind you will struggle.
Its not about being good or bad its about if it relates to you that counts..we all find different needs in different Avenues its just a question if you have found yours.

[clachan]

I wrote this song during this years ashes series,its about cricket,its called;

I love it....by Clachan

I love it,I love,I love it,
I love it ,I love it,I love it,


I love it,,,,,,,,,so on and so forth,

brilliant or what eh??:D:D

[tannah]

I wrote this song during this years ashes series,its about cricket,its called;

I love it....by Clachan

I love it,I love,I love it,
I love it ,I love it,I love it,


I love it,,,,,,,,,so on and so forth,

brilliant or what eh??:D:D

Straight to the point. I love it too, except that I still refuse to buy sky tv and watch it live. Used to love it when it was on BBC and channel 4. Could spend hours watching cricket and practicing guitar at the same time.
I wrote a song back in 1990 odd (when Younis destroyed the English batting) that had a cricket theme, and played it at my local. It wa scalled "my cricket ball's got swing".

hey Uncia, is the guitar evil man? Does it tempt people to sin and act all ungodly? Here's someone playing with their organ, and leading onto some sexy screeching from the vocalist, and then a bit of guitar allegro:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?gl=GB&hl=en-GB&v=PfAWReBmxEs

Enjoy.:)

[converger]

would you like to compose it ?
it is song of case would be
good for you