rhiannon
05-03-2009, 03:44 PM
I have jotted up a document for email circulaton that attempts to introduce the concept of freeman on the land to a complete novice.
I have a relative who is in the entertainment industry who I am keen to persuade to get on board; (he has a few high profile friends). I started this as an email to him introduce the concept of lawful rebellion.
I then, however, got the idea to try and get it to a standard wherby I could get it 'circulating' to spread the word on the movement.
I would really appreciate if anyone could give it a quick read and give me their feedback:
Are there any essential points I have missed out?
Is it concise enough?
Is it easy to understand for a beginner?
Is it too long/short?
Bearing in mind it is the very basics only.
Thanks
I have a relative who is in the entertainment industry who I am keen to persuade to get on board; (he has a few high profile friends). I started this as an email to him introduce the concept of lawful rebellion.
I then, however, got the idea to try and get it to a standard wherby I could get it 'circulating' to spread the word on the movement.
I would really appreciate if anyone could give it a quick read and give me their feedback:
Are there any essential points I have missed out?
Is it concise enough?
Is it easy to understand for a beginner?
Is it too long/short?
Bearing in mind it is the very basics only.
Thanks