Venus & Mars

[brainfreeze]

They'll think we crazy

If we told them the truth

But the good thing about madness

Is you can't do no worse

I'm insane with a passion

A desire for you

A permanent hunger

Deeper than flesh

We're breaking barriers

With boundaries in place

To taste you

Be near you

My perfect fit

I am your Venus

You are my Mars

We have all the answers

They written in the stars

We're the Gods of the old days

Know it as truth

The universe is ours

To explore as we choose

We're flying

And dying

Pretty little deaths

Under Cupids watchful gaze

Intense

Days pale into insignificance

When I drink you in

You're the addiction

I'm positively love drunk on

You lift me up

And carry me home.

[tracker]

They'll think we crazy

If we told them the truth

But the good thing about madness

Is you can't do no worse

I'm insane with a passion

A desire for you

A permanent hunger

Deeper than flesh

We're breaking barriers

With boundaries in place

To taste you

Be near you

My perfect fit

I am your Venus

You are my Mars

We have all the answers

They written in the stars

We're the Gods of the old days

Know it as truth

The universe is ours

To explore as we choose

We're flying

And dying

Pretty little deaths

Under Cupids watchful gaze

Intense

Days pale into insignificance

When I drink you in

You're the addiction

I'm positively love drunk on

You lift me up

And carry me home.



a finite life experience in an infanite universe of feeling . :cool:

thats my little spin on it .Sounds like the life of a star rather than a planet though , after all , they can only fade and can never burn as bright as they do in the now and here .

nice opening refresher there brainfreeze .:cool:

[brainfreeze]

I asked the universe to send him.

It did, with verification! lol

It sounds nuts, but it's true, which is why he didn't go running in fright :p

We've done this before.

Oh, and going by our star signs, we are venus and mars, polar opposites, to the day.

[tracker]

I asked the universe to send him.

It did, with verification! lol

It sounds nuts, but it's true, which is why he didn't go running in fright :p

We've done this before.

well as long as you are happy with it there is no need to change it .
good luck and stuff to you .

its quite refreshing to see such joyiouse phylosophy .

how wonderful . :cool:

fess up brainfreeze its a pop song from the 80s and i cant for the life of me remember which one .

[brainfreeze]

well as long as you are happy with it there is no need to change it .
good luck and stuff to you .

its quite refreshing to see such joyiouse phylosophy .

how wonderful . :cool:

fess up brainfreeze its a pop song from the 80s and i cant for the life of me remember which one .

Thank you Tracker :)

My normal poetry is usually so bleak!

Just saw your end comment. No, it's one of mine :)

I was playing this tune while I wrote it, you'll see it kind goes to the beat, but I mess up with it a bit.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eGjKIRlEf80&eurl=http://mrs-smith.rare-companion.com/blog-29549-happy-new-year.php&feature=player_embedded

[tracker]

Thank you Tracker :)

My normal poetry is usually so bleak!

sounds as though you either have a perfect partner or atleast have a strong enough backbone to know what you want and dont settle for second best .

Dont go spoiling it now ! :rolleyes:

Dont tell ! be :cool:

its better that way . :cool:

[brainfreeze]

sounds as though you either have a perfect partner or atleast have a strong enough backbone to know what you want and dont settle for second best .

Dont go spoiling it now ! :rolleyes:

Dont tell ! be :cool:

its better that way . :cool:


I added to my post up there ^ ^ did you see?

I think it's both! I've been single for 5 years. I waited until I was ready.

I knew I was ready when I wrote this...

Meloncholy

I've not been home in years
Forgotten where it is
The map with the way back
Where x marked the spot
Taken by strong winds that breaks limbs
And hearts
I'm lost
With no warmth from the hearth
No glow in the window on a black night
To guide me
I'm trapped
In a fairy tale without a happy ending
In a dungeon
I built myself out of pride, brick by brick
To keep evil out while I wait for you
To charge to my rescue, my gallent prince
I'm spilling wine wearing a torn dress
Wasting time
Tallying up the pound signs, minus the damage
With plenty to feast on and nothing to loot
I've sold myself short protecting my worth
In chains that chaff the skin, deep
I've given up
Play pretending I don't miss what I don't have
Till I believe it myself
And there is nothing left to take or to give
Or to miss
Solitude
Saps my strength, making me weak with meloncoly
I'm pining for a place I've never known or ever been
Feeling home sick

[tracker]

1st of all i will respond to what you said about being single for 5 years then i will return to read that thing you wrote .

its good to see some one isnt afraid to brave the cold wind brainfreeze and stick it out alone because they have charactor integrety and spiritual strength !

so many people settle for second best because they feel they are not worth much them self .

its good to see others know the truth that it is better to be single than to settle for second best .
atleast that way , when love does show its face , its the real thing !:cool:

[brainfreeze]

1st of all i will respond to what you said about being single for 5 years then i will return to read that thing you wrote .

its good to see some one isnt afraid to brave the cold wind brainfreeze and stick it out alone because they have charactor integrety and spiritual strength !

so many people settle for second best because they feel they are not worth much them self .

its good to see others know the truth that it is better to be single than to settle for second best .
atleast that way , when love does show its face , its the real thing !:cool:


I had to wait to get it right. I'd rather be alone than with the wrong man. Been there, done that and learned from it.

I also had a mantra of, I build these walls around me not to keep you out, but for you to break through because you know my worth.

He did. :)

[tracker]

Meloncholy

I've not been home in years
Forgotten where it is
The map with the way back
Where x marked the spot
Taken by strong winds that breaks limbs
And hearts
I'm lost
With no warmth from the hearth
No glow in the window on a black night
To guide me
I'm trapped
In a fairy tale without a happy ending
In a dungeon
I built myself out of pride, brick by brick
To keep evil out while I wait for you
To charge to my rescue, my gallent prince
I'm spilling wine wearing a torn dress
Wasting time
Tallying up the pound signs, minus the damage
With plenty to feast on and nothing to loot
I've sold myself short protecting my worth
In chains that chaff the skin, deep
I've given up
Play pretending I don't miss what I don't have
Till I believe it myself
And there is nothing left to take or to give
Or to miss
Solitude
Saps my strength, making me weak with meloncoly
I'm pining for a place I've never known or ever been
Feeling home sick

sounds like some one realy did wake up with a "BUMP" . :rolleyes:

it doesnt do the soul any good to feel that way though , unless i have read it wrongly .

still ? again refreshing this time in the morning .

I woke up 4am here with a headache and a stuffy nose .Its now 8;10am

after puting on VIX vapour rub and a warm water bottle on my tum , i thought that my alternate matrix thread would pull of a good converstaion . after all you know the tracker , not good at things like that . but your thread seems to lift an invisible weight from somewhere im not familiar with , if you get my drift .

anyway ? one thing you can say brainfreeze .
You have walked the walk !
umlike those who have the "gift of the gab" and have to "talk about the walk" , you will know better because youve walked it .:cool:

[tracker]

I had to wait to get it right. I'd rather be alone than with the wrong man. Been there, done that and learned from it.

I also had a mantra of, I build these walls around me not to keep you out, but for you to break through because you know my worth.

He did. :)

thats a good way to look upon it . Any man that can break those walls there fore proves his worth , i defo see the sense in that one .

anyway just to show you how fkd up my poetry is look at this , its about as romantic and sentimental tracker can get .
















ready ?

















sure ?
















:rolleyes: ok then here goes .





















Once upon a time
the bird sat on the line

and the monkey chewed tobbaco .

the little doggy ran about with a feather up its ars
to see which way the wind blew .

the wind blew north
then blew south

and turned the little doggies bum hole iside out . :D


















a winner if ever ive heard one .:cool:

[brainfreeze]

sounds like some one realy did wake up with a "BUMP" . :rolleyes:

it doesnt do the soul any good to feel that way though , unless i have read it wrongly .

still ? again refreshing this time in the morning .

I woke up 4am here with a headache and a stuffy nose .Its now 8;10am

after puting on VIX vapour rub and a warm water bottle on my tum , i thought that my alternate matrix thread would pull of a good converstaion . after all you know the tracker , not good at things like that . but your thread seems to lift an invisible weight from somewhere im not familiar with , if you get my drift .

anyway ? one thing you can say brainfreeze .
You have walked the walk !
umlike those who have the "gift of the gab" and have to "talk about the walk" , you will know better because youve walked it .:cool:

It wasn't nice feeling like that, but I've felt worse before, and I was married at the time!

Thank you for sharing in my joy with me Tracker. Go take a deep breath of fresh air to clear that headache and stuffy nose.

I've been working hard on me, "spiritually", sometimes I fail but I forgive myself and start again. It get's easier, but I've still much to learn.

I was reading your matix thread. I've still got to read the links.

xxx

[tracker]

look ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ above your last post .:cool:

[brainfreeze]

look ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ above your last post .:cool:

Now that sort of poetry I cant write. It takes a certain twisted sense of humour to write that ! :p :D

[tracker]

Now that sort of poetry I cant write. It takes a certain twisted sense of humour to write that ! :p :D

geee shucks your just saying that .
awwwwwww stop it , im going all funny . ;)