A Wee Poem

[pedsi]

Here's a poem i wrote recently i would be interested to hear what you think as
its the first i've written:)

I'm neither black or white
I'm neither rich nor poor
Do i have a name
I'm not really sure
Are you left or right,happy or sad
People always go
What is all this fuss about
I'm a child dont you know

I've come into this world
With an open heart and mind
To love and respect others
And treat them as i find
I need to have expriences
So i can learn and grow
For me that is essential
I'm a child dont you know

Teach me not your prejudice
Your bitterness and hate
And spare me your religous gods
So mighty and so great
Let me form my own beleifs
And I'll reep what I sow
Im not yet an adult
I'm a child dont you know

I know what I'll do
With this precious life of mine
I'm going to be the best i can
To flourish and to shine
I'll keep my head up high
When I am feeling low
I know what your thinking
I'm a child dont you know

Now I am no one special
But I'm very much unique
And this truth within ourselves
Is something we must seek
Loosing fear is the only thing
That you yourself must do
And please remember just one thing
You were once a child too

[them]

I think you should keep writing. I liked your poem.

I scribbled something quickly as a thank you for sharing.

Wondering whilst wandering
I wondered why I was wandering
Then wandering whilst wondering
I got completely lost..

[2013]

very good keep on writing .

I also write some poetry
though most of it is just for me
i might post some here so it is seen
until then your good friend 2013.
Creativity keeps the brain functioning
i think it inteferes with programming .
time is art .:D

[thirdwave]

*thumbs up*

[pedsi]

Thanks for the positive feedback guys much appreciated.Here's a wee verse that I think sums up the majority of people today trapped within their externaly imposed beleif system.

Please dont question 'My'
For it means so much to 'I'
Because of fear I dont ask 'Why'
So I guess I'll stick with 'My'

[h1s_l0rdsh1p]

I'm use to living in tropical weather (originally from florida), and the other day it started snowing..

It was cold, the wind was blowing very hard, and I was getting all wet going back home.
I felt sick at the end of the day. So I wrote a poem to make myself feel better.


Snow-

FUCK SNOW!



Ok, I'm sorry. I'm just having some fun..

Anyways, I did like the poem that was written(by all of you, of course ;) )
but I like darker kind of poems. Anybody write anything that just makes you question, or scares you? :)