bennett211085
26-08-2010, 07:29 PM
ok so I have a friend who produces music so I thought I'd have a hack at writting some lyrics, I knocked this up earlier, its not complete but the basis is there. I've got a chorus, intro and outro sorted (all can be changed/ edited, your input positive or negative is welcome).
Trying to make it more relatable to a wider audience.
Heres what I got so far, feel free to give me more versus :)
(if its shit, just say please)
(this post is evidence i wrote this shit, dont copy me fool. lol)
bennett211085
27-08-2010, 05:44 PM
(chorus)
Why does it feel like I'm the one losing my mind,
you hit rockbottem and I try to be kind,
But you act suicidal, crazy and mad,
your split personallitys make me feel sad
So I ask you bruv, please sort your head out
cause we love you man, bring the old you back now
Stop talking bout all this doom and gloom,
you'll feel better with your foot down, cranking the tunes.
Im sorry little bruva, what can I say
Dont care if mans think I'm crazy or gay.
I suppose I could just get on with my life.
Not waste my time, and turn a blind eye.
But I'd toss and turn, wouldnt sleep at night.
always thinking, I just gave up the good fight.
gonna be a soldier who fights for the truth,
its a war of words, for the minds of the youth!
chorus:
Cuz I tell what I think, yeah I'll tell you how i feel
But you wont like it, saying "keep it real".
"forget about that shit, and focus on the grind"
"Time is money, and your money is your time"
So i think to myself, "better break this shit gently"
you can sell your soul , and money, you'll have plenty.
Its not that I cant do, with the extra cash,
But I wouldnt waste it all, on trying to look flash.
some rappers these days, they spit without a cause.
All they talk about, is the status the're assured.
But all the underdogs, and riff raff at the bottom,
Use the chat as therepy, to cure a life thats rotten.
chorus
At the end of the day, I got too much pride,
When I open the door, get into my ride,
I get a buzz, acting all crazy,
so Unpredictible, and shady,
With my foot to floor, makes me feel alive,
look at me dodge, i look at you cross-eyed.
those gangster overtones, dont phase me! ;)
put it to the test, Im a kamikazi!
firstly... what kind of song is it? What genre and what are the vocals? rap, mockney, opera :D maybe a bit of all.